true lyricists or not?.lol. | imxherexbutxyouxdontxseexme's Blog

my friend got the idea to write a song for his band today and wanted my help. well of course i helped him out and the end result (according to everyone else isnt too bad). but i wanted some truly expert opinions so im going to post it here and see what all of you think about it.

oh yeah and one more thing it doesnt have a title yet.lol.

i've lost my fight,

hungry and lying and waiting.

i've lost my fight

i've lost my fight

i've lost the fight.

holding on gets so much harder

when your lost and lonely.

i've lost my fight

i've lost my fight

i've lost the fight.

when im watching the tears fall

and the fist fly

i think of all i've been through with you.

i've lost my fight

i've lost my fight

i've lost the fight.

when your out drunk again

and i'm all on my own

i wonder if you ever cared at all.

i've lost my fight

i've lost my fight

i've lost the fight.

when all i've ever cared about

all comes crashing down

i wonder why i still fight

when i know

that i've got nothing left to fight for

i've lost my fight

i've lost my fight

i've lost the fight

when i watch you crying

i want to know whats so bad

so wrong

it makes me wanna fight but i know that:

i've lost the fight

i've lost the fight

i've lost the fight....

(and my friend thinks that it should prolly fade out instead of ending ubruptly.) and thats the end. tell me watcha think.